सोमवार, 18 जून 2018




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vc ;fgdk yYyu D;kj Hkkx dgk tk; fd nqHkkZxA HkkX; ;gq fd uQhlk pkph vifu tehu D;kj cSukek yYyu ds ukeS db nhUgsu vkSj nqHkkZx ;gq Hkk fd ogh jkr uQhlk pkph dsj bUrdky gksb xkA yYYku vkS uQhlk pkph dsj dmuks [kwu dsj fjLrk rks u jg;] eqyq uQhlk pkph ds cjs yfjdk rs de u jg;A dkgs rs fd tcrs uQhlk pkph ds lkSgj eks0 eqLrQk dsj bUrdky Hkk jg;] rc rs e; ifjokj yYyu uQhlk pkph dsj ns[kHkky dhUgsl jg;A ogS muds lq[k nq%[k dsj lk>h jg;A obls rks uQhlk pkph dmuks vdsyh u jg;A rhu fcfV;k vkS ,dq yfjdk dsj Hkjk&iwjk ifjokj jg;A eqyq fcfV;k vius ?kj ifjokj ek lq[kh jg; vkS yfjdk vkfcn lgj ek dmuks Å¡ps vksgns ek ukSdjh djr jg;A muds [kkyktkr HkkbZ jgeku vkS dbZ vmj [kkunkuh ogh xk¡o ek clr jg;A uQhlk pkph ds lkSgj eksgEen eqLrQk xkWo dsj ij/kku jg; vkS mb viuh ij/kkuh ek xkWo ds fodkl ek iwjk /;ku nhUgsuA ljdkj }kjk pykbZ tk; okyh gj ;kstuk dk mb xkWo ek ykxw djok;su jg;A xkWo ds gj eubZ ds lq[k nq[k] gsr O;ogkj] rht&R;ksgkj ek mb lkFkS jgr jg;A ;fg rs xkWo okys mudk cgqr ekur jg;A ;fg fy;s tc mudk bUrdky Hkk rks xkWo okys pgfr jg; fd uQhlk pkph ij/kku cus] eqyq pkph viu d b cokyu rs nwfj j[ksu vkSj viu ealk tkfgj dhUgsu fd vc mb ;k ftUnxh d [kqnk dh cUnxh ek xqtkjk pgrh g;A muds yfjdk vkfcn pgr jg; fd vEeh muds lkFkS lgj pyS] eqyq uQhlk pkph dk ;gkS ukxokj jg; lks vkfcn tc okil ymVs rks mb yYyu rs dgsfu] ßHkb;kA b jO;kru dk rqe tksrks O;kokS vkS vEeh D;kj [;ky j[kkSA ge iapS le;≤ ij xkWo vkok dfjcSA yYyu vkfcn rs dgsfu] ßHkkbZ vkfcnA rqe pkph dbrh rs fulk[kkfrj jgoA vkS yYyu pkph dsfj rkftUnxh lsok dbds viu dkSy fuHkk;sflAÞ
  tc uQhlk pkph chekj iM+h vkS [kfV;k idfM+ yhUgsu rks muds ukrs&fjLrsnkj ft xkWo ek clr jg; mb rks mudsfj gkyr nsf[k ds ukd HkkS fldksM+r jg;A usjs rd u vkor jg;A eqyq yYyu pkph dsj th tku rs lsok dhUgsl] ik[kkuk rd lkQ djsfl] pkph ofgdh lsok Hkko rs vl xnxn HkbZ fd mb vifu lc tehu yYyu ds uke db nhUgsuA exj ogh jkr pkph py clhA
  vc ;k rks tekus dsfj jhfr vk; fd eubZ tYnh dksgqd dsj c<+rh ugh nsf[k ldr g;A fQfj pkph dsfj n;k rs yYyu rks etnwj rs lh/ks fdlku gksbxkA lks xkWao ds cgqr eubZ bjlk rs ijfp mBsA mb xkWo ek ,dq diksy dFkk cuk; ds izpkfjr dbZ nhUgsu fd ßyYyu tknw&Vksuk dbds pkph dk vius cl ek db ds tehu viS ukeS djk; yhUgsl g; vkS tehu ukeS HkS ufgu fd pkph dk ljx dk jLrk ns[kk; nhUgsflA ;gq yYyu rks vLrhu dsj lkWi fudlk] ekSdk yxrs  Mfl yhUgsflAÞ
  dkuS dku tc ;k ckr pkph dh vkSyknu ds dku ek ijh rks mUgqu dk ykx fd ßfcuk fpaxkjh drgw vkx ykxr g;A t:j ;fgek dqN lPpkbZ g;A ugha rks vEeh ;gq tehu dsj VqdMk ekew g ds uke fyf[k nsrhA ;gq rks ljklj /kks[kk /kM+h vk; vkSj ;fgdk eq¡g rksM+ tokc vc ge n~;kc vkS ;fg dkfQj rs viu tehu okil yb ds jgcAÞ vkfcn ds [kkunkuh lqusfu rks vkfcn ds ihB Bksdsfu] ßlkcklA ,dq lPpk balku ogS g; tks vius [kkunku dsj uke jks'ku djSA vius  /kje&beku dk ikyu djSA vc rqe ofg tehu dk VqdM+k yYyu rs okil ybds viu izfr"Bk dk;e djkSA
  xqjt ;gq fd /khjs&/khjs ogq tehu D;kj VqdM+k /kje dk izrhd cfuxkA iwjk xkWo dk xkWo nqb [ksHkk ek c¡fVxkA ,dq dgr jg; fd vc ;g tehu dmfum rjk okil u dhUg tkbZA pkgs [kwu dsjh ufn;k¡ dkgs u cfg tk;A cblh nwlj [ksek vkfcn dk HkM+dkor jg; fd yYyu rs ;g tehu gj&gky ek yhUg tkbA
  tmu xkWo vkt ryd eubZ&eubZ ek dmuks Hksn u ekur jg;A bZn dh lsob¸;k vkS gksyh dsjh xqf>;k gj tcku dk Lokfny djrh jg;A jgeku pkpk jkeyhyk ek guqeku dsj ikVZ vnk djr jg; rks eugj dkdk jkst+k vQ+rkj dsj bUrtke cM+s tksl ls djr jg;A eqyq dk dgk tk; ;fg cs<+c  oDr dk\ iy ek lc myV&iqyV gksbxkA lgh g dgk tkr g;A tj tks: vkS tehu yM+kbZ dsj tM+ g; lks ;gq tehu D;kj VqdM+k eubu ds eu ek Bw¡B gksbxk vkS I;kj eksgCcr dsj gfj;kyh lq[kk; x;A
  vkfcn lcds dgs ek vk; ds tehu D;kj VqdMk okil ys; ds cjs eqdnek nk;j dhUgsu vkS vxyh islh rd ds cjs lgj okil gksb xSA cblh tehu ij lc fgUnw&eqyleku nwUgksa viu&viu gd trkoS ykxA gdnkj rks cgqr gksbZ xS eqyq j[kokjk ,dq u HkkA /kku dsj rS;kj Qly [;kr ek Bk<+&Bk<+ lq[kk; ykxA yYyu cspkjk Hkfj&Hkfj vk¡f[ku Qly lq[kkr n~;k[kr jgk] eqyq b /kje ds Bsdsnkj ofgdk [;kr ek ik¡o u /kjS nhUgsuA xjhc D;kj [kwu] tmuq ilhuk cfu ds tehu ek fxjk jg;] tfgdk /kjrh ekrk vius mnj ek lesfVds vUu ds eksrh ds :i ek okil dhUgsl jg; og lc csnnhZ ds HksaV pf<+ xSA exj tc eubu dh vk¡f[ku ek ikuh u gks; rks [;kr ek ikuh d dks dgSA lhap ds vHkko ek vblh Qly lw[kr jgh] oblh isV dsfj fpUrk ek yYyu D;kj ftmA Hkw[k dsfj vfxu vkS /kjrh dsfj riu cq>koS D;kj mik; u jg;A
  islh ijS ij vkfcn lgj rs vk;sA vnkyr ek vkfcn vkS yYyu nwUgksa vi; ny&cy ds lkFk ekStwn jg;A tc yYyu dsfj gkftjh Hk; vkS ofgrs iwNk xk rks fcpkjs D;kj gyd lw[kxk] tcku rkyw rs pifd ykfx vkS vk¡f[ku ek vk¡lw Hkfj vk;A odhyu dsfj jVh jVkbZ ckr tcku rs unkjr gksb xS vkS fny dsfj ckr fcuk jVs tcku rs QwfV iM+hA cksyk ßekbZ ckiA gedk dqNkS ugha irkA ge rks dfygw uQhlk pkph ds lsod jgu vkS vktkS viud ;gS lef>r g;A gd csgd ge dk tkuh\ ;g tehu rks gekfj egrkjh luk; g;A dgr&dgr ofgds vkokt :af/k xSAÞ
  [kSj eqdnek dsj gkyq rks ogS Hkk tkSuq gks; d pghA vnkyr dsfj dkjokgh fny rs ugha fnekx rs pyr g;] vmj fnekx lcwr rs] vkS lcwr /ku rs iq[rk gksr g;A QSlyk Hkk fd tehu ij vkfcn dsj gd ekuk tkbA yYyu dk ;fg tehu rs vnkyr csn[ky djr g;A lqfu ds vkfcn dk lhuk pkSM+k gksbxkA njvly ;g thr [kkyh tehuh u jg;] etgch jg;A yYyu rks vnkyr dk QSlyk lqfu ds gkjs tqvkjh dh rjk  eq¡g yVdk; ds xkWo ru pfy Hk;A
  vkfcn [kqlh rs Qwys u lekfr jg;A mb lcrs ifgys viuh ofg /kjrh dk lyke djs i¡gqpsA igq¡ps rks ftm /kDd rs HkkA ifgys tmfu tehu Qly rs ygygkfr jg; ok vktq catj iM+h jg;A muds xjc rs rus psgjk d nsf[ko ds /kjrh ogh rjk Bw¡B jghA lkjk mRlkg dkQwj gksbxkA eu ek mnklh f?kfj vkbZA
  cgqr n~;kj rd [;kr ek :dS d ckfn tc mb viS ?kjS igq¡ps rks ?kj ek /kqIi v¡/ksjk Nkok jg;A njoktk [kksfyu rks pjejk; ds [kqfy xkA dgk tkr g; fd fcuk eubu ?kj Hkwru dsj Msjk gksr g;A lks uQhlk pkph ds ckfn ?kj ek dksm fn;k ckrh djb;k u jg;A ?kj ek txg&txg edM+h tkyk cquS jg;A ?kj dk ;gq gky nsf[k ds rks mb ?kcjk mBSA ckgj fudls rks dksm fn[kkbZ u nhUgslA xk¡o ek oblks eubZ lgh la>S viS&viS ?kj ek nqcd tkr g;A vkfcn dk ykx fd jkr vdsys dmuh rjk dVhA f[kUu eu rs mb cjks
  lcsjs&lcsjs ekew tku gkftj gksb xSA eubZ vi; LokjFk dk fl) djs d cjs fxjfxV dh rjk :i cnyr g;A tc pkph chekj jg; rc rks mb pkph ds ?kj dbrh n~;k[kr rd u jg; fd drgw ;k cyk gejs flj u ef< tk;A eqyq vktq rks ekew tku vkfcn dk csVok&csVok dgr v?kkr u jg;A dkgs rs fd mudk fcLokl jg; fd vkfcn ;fg xk¡o ek fVdS okys g; ugha] lks vc ;gq tehu D;kj VqdM+k mufgu dk feyhA ;fg xk¡o ek lcls djhch fjLrsnkj ob g;A [kqlh ds ekjs mb ckj&ckj vib nk<+h ek gkFk fQjkor jg; vkS ;fg bUrktkj ek jg; fd vkfcn muds eu dh ckr eq¡g rs fudkjSA eqyq ;gq dk\ vkfcn tmuq dhUgsu ofg rs ekew tku Bxs ls jfg xsA mb rks mudh vklk ds foijhr yYyu dk cksyk;su vkS cksys ßyYyuA tehu dsj cVokjk /kje] etgc ;k LokjFk ds uke ij ugha dhUg tk ldr g;A og rks geslk fdlku dsj jgh g; vkS vktkS ofg ij ogh dsj gd g;A ;gq tehu D;kj VqdM+k rqEgkj g;A ;fg ij rqEgkj gd g;A vEeh tku ,dq dke v/kwjk NksfM+u g;] ofgdk ge iwjk dfjr g;A ;fg tehu ds lkFkS ;gq ?kjkS rqEgjS ukeS dfjr g;] tfgek ;gq ?kj xtxt gksb tk;A ;fg ?kj ek vEeh dsjh ;kns g;A xkWo okys lqusfu rks [kqlh ds fn;k  rs muds fg;k txexk; mBsA
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